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Bier de Stone

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Opening image of BS beat sheet

A fly on the wall. As the fly takes flight, the camera follows it past employees in the bldg. It searches for food. It follows it's senses. When it finds the source of the food aroma, it makes a sweep over it. It makes multiple sweeps over it only to be shewd away as an intrudor by an employee. Frustrated, the fly makes one last fly-by. It attempts to get as close as possible as it had ever before in previous fly-bys. When it comes to the point when it is directly over the plate of food, it shits on it in mid air. Camera makes close up on the fly turf where it landed on food and follow portion into the mouth of the employee.

hasn't this ever happened to you? Aside from the dump which the fly takes in mid air, I always wonder whether this isn't actually the purpose for a fly who seems to fly past one's food continually despite previous efforfts to land.

Blast! I have to find a way to include this scenario in the first 5 minutes of screenplay which I'm writing using a manual typewriter.

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